1984: Void Indigo

Void Indigo (1984) #1-2
by Steve Gerber and Val Mayerik

Ah, the infamous Void Indigo: I remember it being a much talked-about comic at the time… because it was cancelled for being too violent. I think.

I had these issues as a teenager, and I was not a fan. I was rather squicked by it all.

Steve Gerber famously left Marvel in the late 70s, and sued them for ownership of the Howard the Duck character, so there was a lot of bad blood between them. But Epic Comics was formed as a way to lure writers such as Gerber back into the fold, with Archie Goodwin supposedly forming a firewall between the creators and the other Marvel people (especially Jim Shooter, who many felt were responsible for their miserable Marvel experience).

Before the Epic Comics series, Marvel published a Void Indigo graphic novel. In retrospect, it’s a weird way of introducing a series, but back in the mid 80s, companies were trying out a bunch of different publishing models. Gerber and Mayerik certainly make their intentions known from the start: We open with a fully-painted spread of violence and mayhem.

Oh, that scene I still remembered from when I last read this over 30 years ago. (And the torture starts on the next page, but I’ll spare you that: It’s vile.) There’s something about mouths disappearing that’s particularly nauseating to me.

The murder and torture is just the preamble, though: Then we go to Earth and our protagonist meets use proto-sentients.

As a graphic novel, it’s… not. It reads like what it is: A superfluous barbarian super-hero origin preamble. Nothing much interesting happens in it, and it’s practically devoid of structure. It’s by no means a satisfying reading experience, and Mayerik’s painted artwork isn’t as accomplished as his pencil-and-ink artwork. He’s always had a problem with human proportions, and head size/body size proportions are perpetually off and fluctuating.

So that’s not an auspicious introduction to Void Indigo… especially as it doesn’t really seem to be necessary for the series that follows, either.

Which doesn’t start off in the most pleasant way, either: A transsexual man kills a drag queen with a razor blade. (And is then immediately killed by Our Hero.)

And just… how… was Mayerik doing the colouring? Crayons? I understand that they didn’t want to do mechanical seps on an “adult” comic like this, but this is just insane.

It’s also got some surprising amateurish problems like inconsistent word balloon placement, making the reader guess what order to read stuff in.

That said: This is a pretty interesting story and milieu we’re getting. There’s a bewildering number of characters, but they all do seem like distinct characters, both in the way they talk and the way Mayerik depicts them. The story, which seemed like a really simple torture/revenge story in the graphic “novel” now grows satisfyingly complex, with all these characters having their own motives, and have agency beyond being bit players to the hero with thinning hair.

Gerber apparently quotes from a book about popular culture, which I first took at face value, and as a defence against detractors saying that the book is way, way too violent.

But as becomes clearer later in the issue, the book in question is written by one of the characters in the book (or somebody with connection to these characters; I’m not completely sure).

I’m a sucker for post-modern tomfoolery with authorship, so I’m totally on board with this. My branes went “oo fun” when I got to this page.

Gerber is just all kinds of clever with how he keeps things interesting. This is how a character that seems like would going to become (oh, the tenses) important to the story later is introduced. Yes, Mayerik isn’t quite up to actually depicting a child, so it looks like a woman with a bizarrely big head, but beyond that, it’s all kinds of good.

And then… the book was cancelled.

writes in The Comics Journal #95, page 11

Marvel axes Void Indigo after 2 issues:
lateness, controversial content cited
Epic Comic’s controversial new
Void Indigo series is being
cancelled with its second issue,
making it the first ongoing Epic
series to be cancelled. Only two
months earlier, a copy of the
graphic novel had been seized by
Canadian customs officials who
thought it might have violated
pornography statutes.
Dealer resistance and schedules:
According to Void Indigo’s
creator and writer, the main
reason the series was cancelled
was dealer resistance to its
unusually violent and bizarre
concepts. and attendant low
sales. According to Gerber, sales
were in the 30,000-40,000 range.
Secondarily, he said, he was late
on the book, having only a
rough outline for the first half-
dozen issues.
Gerber said that prior to the
cancellation, he and Epic Editor
Archie Goodwin discussed
changing the book’s premise to
make it more palatable to the
audience, but Gerber didn’t
think it would avail anything.
“The book’s image was already
fixed in everyone’s minds, and I
wasn’t interested in watering
down the book’s concept—it
wouldn’t win anybody over, and
it would only alienate the iwo or
three people who liked the
book. ”
Marvel also said that Gerber
was behind schedule on the
book, and that the sales on it
were harmed by this. Steve
Saffel, Marvel’s assistant
promotional manager for direct
sales, said that Gerber’s work
on projects such as Marvel
Productions (Marvel’s
animation studio) made it
difficult for him to maintain a
regular schedule on Void
Indigo. “Irregular shipping
schedules hurt our books
badly,” he added. Saffel said
that the creative members
involved “scrambled about” for
a while, but eventually there was
no choice but to cancel the
comic.
Seized in Canada: During its
brief life span, the comic set a
precedent for Marvel, as it was
seized at the Canadian border
by customs officials who
thought the comic might have
violated pornography statutes
regarding the depiction of
women.

[…]

After the initial problems he
had with the graphic novel, Van
Leeuwen made the decision not
io carry the regular Epic series
at all. assuming the Series would
, continue on in the same vein.
just took a moral stand, and
-none of the stores I supply will
carry it from me,” he said. ‘ ‘My
accounts can go elsewhere if
they want them. I personally
object to the book.” Prior to
Marvel’s decision to cancel the
series, Van Leeuwen expressed
his feelings 9bout the book.
“I’d just like to see Marvel cut
off the whole series, to tell you
the truth,” he said.
No returns: Van Leeuwen
expressed his displeasure at
Marvel’s refusal to allow returns
for credit on copies of Void
Indigo. According to Saffel, no
returns will be allowed, but Van
Leeuwen thinks they should.
“Marvel feels [retailers and
distributors] were sufficiently
warned about the book’s
contents, but they didn’t tell us
it was going to be grotesque,”
he said.

Art Cover writes in The Comics Journal #100, page 97

Steve Gerber’s comeback was stopped dead in
its tracks with the furor caused by Void
Indigo. However, as Gerber (last intervieued
in Journals and 957) displays in this litter•
view, this setback will not dismay him. For the
first time since before his lawsuit against
Marvel in 1978, Gerber plans to write the
character that first propelled him to fandom’s
spotlight—Howard the Duck. While he is not
entirely certain that the book will actually
appear, and while he is equally unsure about
its reception in a marketplace that is more con-
servative than the one he terote for in ’78,
Gerber is going to ask America to ‘ ‘get down ‘
once agatn.
This interview was conducted by Art Cover„
transcribed by Mark Thompson and Tom
Heintjes, and was edited by Gerber and
Heintjes.
ART COVER: I’d like to start off by talking
about Void Indigo.
STEVE GERBER: Naturally. (laughter]
COVER: though 1 sure that 1
liked the book, I felt that it wasn’t given much
of a chance in the marketplace, to succeed or
fail on its own merits. What happened?
GERBER: Well, most of the reporting
about it has been fairly accurate. Maybe
too much was made about the incident of
the graphic novel having been stopped at
the Canadian border. Essentially What
happened was, a box of books broke open
at customs, Someone looked at the book,
was disturbed by the contents, and sent
one copy on to Ottawa for review by
Canada’s censorship board. The other 199
copies in the box went on to whatever
dealer ordered them. Nothing more ever
came of it.
But there were a number of problems sur
rounding this book. Certain distributors
themselves, personally, found it objec-
tionable. Some dealers objected to the
language, the nudity, the violence. One
distributor even mounted a campaign to
discourage his retailers from ordering the
Ex»oü.
COVER: Do sou u.’ant to sas who that was?
GERBER: NO, because can’t substan-
tiate it. I’m only relating to you what other
people have told me about this.
The book made an excellent target for
certain people who are disturbed about the
current state of comics. It was violent, the
language was rough, there was not a clearly
sympathetic heroic character at the fore of
the series—although I don’t think Jhagur,
the protagonist, was unsympathetic, either
—just extremely strange.
COVER: Neutral.
GERBER: Ambiguous, yeah, and difficult
to relate to. Also Void Indigo was a book in
its infancy, an easy book to mount a cam-
paign against. And a book that would be
easy to get canceled. I think a lot of people
took out a lot of frustrations on it. Also, I
think some people just genuinely didn’t
like it. Maybe most people didn’t.
Anyway, to wrap this up, the dealers
didn’t want to order the book, the
distributors didn’t want to carry it, and,
under those circumstances, Marvel didn’t
want to publish it, because it wasn’t going
to make any money. My feeling was, rather
than change the book and bring it more in
line with the mainstream, let it die a quick
and painless death. Archie Goodwin and
Val Mayerik agreed with me completely.
We never fought the cancellation.
COVER: Do you think it might have been a
capegoat, reflecting some people’s frustration
with Marvel? That they simply picked on
Void Indigo, a book they didn’t understand,
using it as a uay of saying, “‘Watch what you
put out!’ Not necessarily because of the sex
. and the violence, but because there’s just an
easy’ target.
GÉRBER: The sex and violence made it
an easy target. But what you’re suggesting
may be true to some extent. I wouldn’t
want to minimize, though, the degree to
which some people just didn’t care for it or
were offended by it.
COVER: Well, I talked to some who were
offended, and I talked to some who liked it.
GERBER: You found someone? (laughter)
COVER: Yes, 1 did! Really, absolutely.
GERBER: Who? Tell me!
COVER: One of the bookstore’s employees
always liked the book. But she wasn ‘t a regular
annics reader. She just reads alternative stuff.
GERBER: Most of the people I know who
liked it—and believe me, I can count them
on the fingers of both hands—were not
regular comics readers. A lot of them were
very impressed with it and didn’t under.
stand the reaction to it. But then, these are
people who go to movies regularly, who
read contemporary fiction..
COVER: Who are interested in the sex and
tiolence in their own lives.
GERBER: Exactly. [laughter) I couldn’t
have put it better.

I had forgotten about the boycott stuff, and I had suppressed this bit:

COVER: I understand Void Indigo was
originally a version of Hawkman that yu tried
to do for DC.
GERBER:- Yes, that is true.
COVER: And when I saw the final Product; I
just couldn •t understand. How many changes
did take it through?
GERBER: Many. Obviously, if there had
been any resemblance left to Hawkman by
the time it was sold as Void Indigo, we
would have been in big trouble.
It started out as a revamping of Hawk*
man, combining the Earth-I and Earth•2
versions into a new version of the charac-
ter. The idea being that he was an alien
from Thanagar who was the reincarnation
of an ancient Egyptian prince. That basic
idea survived into Void Indigo. All the
names were changed, of course, the wings
disappeared, the powers were completely
different.

But what did the critics think?

Carter Scholz writes in The Comics Journal #98, page 43

A lot of page space is given to details of
torture and death. There is, as in The
Medusa Chain, as in the films of Brian
DePalma, that “waning of affect” Jameson
mentions as a trait •of the post-modern.
And again, the craft WOFk is high, and the
guesomeness is justified in terms of the
story—but it is given that same peculiar
emphasis.
Says the alien: “Your agony—and that of
those Of your disciples—will provide the
entertainment from now on.”
Unquestionably the details of mass death
are in our contemporary air. And no one
can honestly deny Gerber’s or Colon’s
right to display them in a coherent story.
But we may, with . all critical distance
abolished, ask why. To what end? Enver-
tainment? Some of this stuff would gag a
maggot:

[…]

Gerber is engaged in something quite
complicated here. We hear a lot about
expanding the potential of the comics
medium, but usually from the standpoint
of visual innovation. Gerber, seemingly,
-could not care less about the visual, and is
bent on telling, in a comi% a kind of story
inimical to comics.

Steve Gerber writes in The Comics Journal #99, page 8

In the future, Groth, will you kindly
check out your suppositions before
presenting them as facts! Please?
Void Indigo was, in fact. offered to
Eclipse, First. Pacific, and DC, as well as
Mar v el.
All of the independents passed: Eclipse
it too violent; Pacific couldn’t
visualize how the prose treatment and
Val Mayerik’s presentation drawin$
would translate into a comic book; First
claimed it had a similar project in the
works. DC was lukewarm toward Val’s
“Ork and declined to negotiate on
ownership of the copyright and division
of ancillary income; that left us with
nothing to discuss.
We chose Epic for three reasons:
In a market dominated by mutant nin•
ja teenagers, we felt this book needed
every ounce and, yes, every dollar of pro-
I-notional Support it could get. Marvel.
we knew, was capable of providing that
support; we were less certain about the
smaller publishers.
Secondly, both Val and I like working
with Archie Goodwin, Who, by anyone’s
standards, is one Of the most competent
and creative editors in the industry.
Thirdly, following the out-of-court
settlement of the Howard the Duck case,
it struck me that it would make an inte-
resting Stateinent to return to Marvel
with a property copyrighted in my name
(and Val’s, of course).

R Fiore writes in The Comics Journal #96, page 34

There’s screwy and then there’s screury.
“Humans… cannot bear to face the dark-
ness in their nature” in these nasty old lat-
ter days (according to the introduction)
but if Steve Gerber has his way you’ll get
your minimum daily requirement and then
some. Three bloody killings in this issue
and it feels like more. Gerber’s been on this
graphic violence kick for a good five years
now, and he still hasn’t figured out that the
true darkness is inside the human heart
and not in the act of cutting it out.

RA Jones writes in Amazing Heroes #58, page 58

AVOID INDIGO

“He is gashed, punctured, ham-
mered, and mauled.”
By the time you reach the mid.
way point of this graphic novel,
you may feel equally tortured. Void
Indigo is unquestionably one of the
most vividly violent books of the
year. Blood flows as freely as
water, as the characters are
maimed, mutilated, and murdered.
[…]

The most discussed aspect of this
book will probably be the graphic
aviolence, but quite frankly it made
little impression on me one •„vay or
the other.

[…]

The art is atrocious, far below the
level at which Val Mayerik is
capable of working. It looks as if he
used fingerpaints to execute the
graphics. If he intended to do the
coloring, he •would have been wise
to purchase a dictionary first. Then
he could have looked up the word
“indigo” and learned that it
describes a dark blue color—not
the sickly yellow he employs on
more than one occasion. The hues
throughout the book look pale and
watered down, especially when
compared to the vibrant coloring
evident on the front and back
covers.

1984: Timespirits

Timespirits (1984) #1-8
by Steve Perry and Tom Yeates

I haven’t read this series before, and my guess is that I didn’t buy it at the time because I was rather fed up with time travel stories? But I do love Tom Yeates’ artwork, so perhaps I just kinda like missed it.

Steve Perry’s name is familiar to me now, but reading his Wikipedia page, I think perhaps it’s just from reading the Kultz piece he did in Epic Illustrated?

Anyway, whatever is the case, I was not prepared for this book. Let’s just read the first three pages together:

First of all: Gorgeous artwork from Yeates, with a strange flow of panels that still propels the story forward. But the story: It’s like wha. It’s told in such a … what’s a positive synonym for “vague”? It’s not digressive, but it has a way of progressing that’s fascinating.

Looking at pages like this, you may feel that it looks like it has to be overwritten. But it’s not. The dialogues are interesting and seem natural. Perry doesn’t spell much out for the reader, but by having a natural teacher/pupil dynamic going, he can let us know a lot (and there’s a lot to know about this universe) without using captions or “as you know Bob”-ing us.

And he pulls back when no text is necessary.

I’m shocked at how well-made this comic is, and from the first page, I was totally onboard with it.

“Aztec Who?” Perry obliquely alludes to Aztec Ace, which was published at the same time (by Eclipse Comics), and is also about native Americans travelling through time. (I wrote about it here.) It’s a rather big coinkidink, isn’t it? And the books have similarities beyond that: They share some of the language and jokes and have some of the same allusive flow.

Still, they’re pretty different books, not at least because Yates’ artwork is different from Dan Day’s. It looks very photo reference based, doesn’t it? But if so, he’s got pretty good actors available.

Ah, that’s a joke I think Aztec Ace did, too, but it’s impossible not to, right?

There’s no padding in these books, so Yeates had to do 30-32 pages per issue, which must have been taking its toll on a bi-monthly book. But we get one issue with fill-in artists doing one quarter of the issue each. First up is Al Williamson…

… then Steve Bissette and Yeates…

… then Rick Veitch…

… and then John Totleben and Yeates. If I remember correctly, the latter four all went to the SVA around the same time? So I’d guess they’re friends anyway, and perhaps this issue didn’t end up like this because of scheduling, but because they wanted to work together? In any case, it’s amazing how well it works, and the issue is even fuller than usual, spilling out onto the inner back cover, too. Which is very unusual.

Also note that they switched from mechanical colour separations to “full colour” this issue. Epic was experimenting with it across several titles at the time, with varying degrees of success, and it’s rather muddy here.

Hey, good joke.

Gotta do some fourth wall stuff, too. It’s the law.

Steve Oliff does the colours for the remaining issues. It’s good, but… I think it kinda overpowers Yeates’ fabulous linework here and there?

Many people seem to think that Avatar ripped off the concept of blue naked jungle women from this comic, and I guess that’s possible. But on the other hand, it does seem like a pretty obvious thing to do? Right?

Then, for two issues, Timespirits goes all political on us. Here we have a scene of CIA-supported death squads doing their thing in Central America. My guess when reading this was that Yeates had taken over writing the book: In the indicia, he’s not listed as “artist / co-creator” in this issue, but just “co-creator”, and this reads very much like a Yeates sequence. I mean, it’s good and he’s correct, of course, but it’s a rather abrupt change from what’s been going on before in the series.

Predictably, the people who write letters don’t really appreciate this two-issue turn against capitalism.

What? Moench and Gulacy?

That does not look like Gulacy. I think somebody messed up a bit.

Wow, that’s quite a barrage against the CIA storyline. “A so-called ‘comic book'” and what about the Khmer Rouge huh? Huh? HUH?!

Some things never change.

“Since this is the last issue”… That’s all the announcement of the series ending we’re getting.

As final issues go, it’s really inspired and full of insane concepts. I mean, look at that teeth-filled hand. Just look at it.

And then the characters take their bows and it’s over. That’s a classy way to end a comic book, even though it was a rather… sad ending.

This book has never been reprinted, which I think is a shame. It’s gorgeous, it’s fun, and it’s a really good, interesting read.

Bissette writes:

From the summer of 1984 to spring of 1986, Steve collaborated with artist Tom Yeates on the 8-issue fantasy series Timespirits for Archie Goodwin’s Epic Comics line at Marvel. It was initially a fruitful collaboration, yielding a comicbook series still celebrated by its readers and fans, and which some argue provided inspiration for elements of the recent James Cameron blockbuster hit Avatar (2009), specifically the blue tribal people of Timespirits #6 (September 1985). Alas, differences between the creators, including disagreements concerning what direction the series should go (specifically, disagreements concerning overt political content being folded into the series), resulted in an unhappy conclusion to the series and its early termination.

Bissette doesn’t say who was on what side of the disagreement, but Yeates owned up to writing the CIA storyline on the letters page, so I surmise that Perry wanted to keep it more apolitical.

Perry was murdered in 2010.

But what did the press have to say about the book?

writes in Amazing Heroes #60, page 58

Don’t ask me what alimespirit is,
because, frankly, I don’t really
know at this time. Vlhat’s more,
I’m not sure ! care to find out.
I am totally unfamiliar with
scripter Steve Perry, but judging
from this story he is not without
talent. It is well written in both
dialogue and captions, but ulti-
mately it leaves you unfulfilled, as if
some important ingredient was
missing. You can’t pinpoint it ex-
actly; you just know it doesn’t taste
quite right.
I realize that is not a very con-
crete criticism, but it is hard to tell
where this story goes awry. It never
really grabs you and pulls you
within it. We learn little of Doot,
save that he is a good and loyal
boy. The other main character,
Cusick, comes across as cold.
blooded and empty. You are left
with no strong desire to follow the
path these two will take.

RA Jones is wrong, as usual…

TH (Thom Heintjes?) writes in The Comics Journal #102, page 14

An unusual dispute has arisen
between the writer and artist of
Timespirits. When artist Tom
Yeates wanted to rewrite Steve
Perry’s script for issue #6, he got
plot approval from the Epic
comics editorial department, and
permission from Perry. The
disagreement stemmed from the
rewrite that Yeates’s script
underwent after he had completed
the entire story. Both Epic Editor
Archie Goodwin and Perry deny
that Yeates was given as much
creative leeway to rewrite the
story as he took.
Second of two parts: Timespirits
was the conclusion to the
story begun in issue #5, where
the two protagonists, Doot and
Cusick, confront American
governmental and corporate inter-
vention in Central America.
Yeates told the Journal that he
received the finished script for
issue #6, and wasn’t fond of it. “I
just didn’t think the story was
very good. and since I put a lot
of time into my work, I didn’t
want to draw it the way it was,”
he said. “l suggested to Steve that
he might want to work on it, but
he refused to.
“l told him that it had to be
changed or I wouldn’t draw it,
and he told me to go ahead and
work on the script,” Yeates said.
Armed With What he said he was
a “carte blanche•• from Perry,
(with the caveat that the plotlines
were tied together). Yeates
proceeded to create a heavily
political story, involving actual
government figures such as
President Ronald Reagan, former
President Richard Nixon, and
Secretary ‘of State George Schultz,
among others. Yeates’s story was
heavily political. and amounted to
an indictment Of current U.S.
policy in Central America.
Yeates felt strongly enough
about the message he was trying
to get across in the book that he
paid $50 out of his own pocket to
take out an advertisement in
Comics Journal

[…]

Permission: While both Goodwin
and Perry said Yeates was not
allowed as much freedom With
the original script as he took,
Yeates said he got an editorial
go-ahead from Epic Comics
associate editor Laurie Sutton.
“She basically said she thought it
was okay, and she said she liked
it” Yeates said. So Yeates went
ahead and did research into the
Central America situation as well
as the American interests there,
wrote and drew the Story, and
sent it to the Epic offices. When
the story reached the Epic
offices, trouble began. “I talked
to Margaret Clark (associate
editor at Epic), and she let it slip
that Archie Goodwin had
problems with the storylines,” he
said. “She told me that they’d
made a few minor changes.”
Goodwin said the changes were
not made because of the political
content of the story. but bécause
Perry requested the changes be
made. although Goodwin said he
thought the story was “a very bad
piece of propaganda.” “Tom
made it far more political than
anyone had expected,” he said.
“It was naively and oversimplis-
tically done. and it would have
been embarrassing for Steve. If
you’re going to attack the
important issues, you should do it
very well.
“When Steve saw it, he wanted
to make some changes,” Goodwin
added. He also said that Perry
was given the option of simply
taking his name off the book as
writer for issue but that Perry
felt that Yeates had mishandled
the characters, and thus took it
upon himself to reuork the story
construction. Goodwin has
consistently taken an absolute,
anti-censorship stance, and he
denied that the Timespirits
incident constituted censorship,
although the final version of the
story was politically tamer. “The
story was changed because it was
bad writing,” he said. “At what
point is it editing, and at What
point is it censorship?”
One interesting aspect of the
situation is Laurie Sutton’s
dismissal from Marvel. Her firing
came shortly after the Timespirüs
incident, although Goodwin
declined to say that her release
“‘as directly attributable to her
acceptance Of Yeates’s plot
proposal. Goodwin would only
say that “a number of things
weren’t working out;’ adding that
there was a conflict of interest at
work in Sutton’s case. “She was
talking about things she was
going to do at other companies.
and I didn’t think an editor at
Epic should be doing that sort of
thing,” he said. Yeates, though.
said Goodwin told him that
Sutton lost her job at least in part
to the Timespirits incident.
‘Archie laid all the blame on
Laurie. and said •That’s why
Laurie’s not uvrking here any
more?’ he said. Sutton could not
be reached for comment.
Writer% block: Perry told the
Journal that the only changes he
agreed to with Yeates were ‘ •a few
lines Of Jimi Hendrix’s dialogue,”
although Yeates claimed this
version of events was revisionist.
and said that Perry told him he
could rewrite the story as long as
the plotlines were tied together.
However. when Perry received
the reuorked version Of the story,
he decided to intervene. “There
was no way I ever gave Tom a
carte blanche With my charac-
ters—Tom can’t write a sentence,”
he said. “Basically. Tom is
leaving Timespirirs. and he
wanted to make his political
statement before he left. However,
the way I write comic books
differs quite a bit from the way
Tom writes them.”
The dialogue that Yeates wrote
particularly bothered Perry. he
said. “There was no character-
ization—everyone talked like Jimi
Hendrix, and he had I Timespirits
pi•otagonistsl DOOt and Cusick
saying •motherfucker.”‘ he said.
“Everyone talked like Tom talked.
which is basically like Jimi
Hendrix talked.”
There were also philosophical
problems that Perry had with the
Story. He described himself as a
liberal, “but not an activist,” and
he was at Odds With the message
that Yeates espousing in the
story. “I was opposed to the
politics in the story to the extent
that I don’t believe in Commu-
nism,•• he said. • •It’s not the place
of Timespirits to try to change the
poiitical viewpoint in this
country—it’s entertainment.” One
passage that Perry objected to
specifically was where one
character asks. “What’s commu-
nism?”. and the response is, “A
form of government under which
the U.S. corporations can’t exploit
us.” In the printed version, the
first reference to communism was
deleted. and the response was
changed to. “The corporation will
never pull out as long as we
allow them to exploit us.” Also.
Yeates had deleted every instance
where Cusick called Hendrix,
who is black, “me boy.” because
he felt •it could be interpreted as a
racial slur. Perry put this phrase
back in the final version, and he
said he didn’t think it could be
interpreted racially, because the
figure of speech is part of
Cusick’s usual language. Another
revision that especially irked
Yeates was Perry’s insertion of a
racial joke that was told by
George Schultz (see illustration).
Yeates said that he would have
stood by every element of his
version of the story had any libel
suits been filed, but he felt that
he couldn’t stand by what was
said in the rewrite, • ‘I can prove
that George Schultz is on the
board Of directors Of a bank. but
I couldn’t prove he’s a racist.”
Yeates said. “l can’t defend What
was put into the rewrite of the
story.”
In the published version.
besides the script rewrite, the
order of the pages was shuffled.
and the plot that Yeates had
structured was altered. although
the actual art was not altered in
any way. Neither Yeates. Perry. or
Goodwin were completely satis-
fied with the published book.
Goodwin said that while the final
version Of the. story was superior
to Yeates•s, it still wasn’t as good
as it should have been. Perry said
the original plot of his story was
lost in the shuffle. Yeates’s
complaint, though. was the
strongest. because he felt all the
time, uork. and research he had
put into the story were wasted.
“Archie thought my political
vehemence was too direct. and
not theatrical enough,” he said.
“It was a valid point. but I don•t
.think what they did was much of
an improvement.”
An additional aggravation to
Yeates was the fact that
production work, such as whiting
out of unused word balloons and
the pasting up of new word
balloons Was done on his original
pages, and not on Photostats,
which is usually the case when
making corrections. Yeates said
that he had requested that his
pages be shipped back to him so
he could them on display at the
San Diego Comics Convention in.
early August, and although he
knew the changes had been made
in his story, he was surprised to
see production work on his
originals.

What a fucking mess.

Tom Yeates writes a letter published in The Comics Journal #111, page 41

QUESTION: What is the correct course of
action for a comic book artist when he receives
a script that he doesn’t like?
ANSWER: Bend over and do the job like a
good prostitute.
Received a copy of the Comics Journal with
the news article on Timespirits The article
was interesting, but much of the particulars
were yrong. Too bad your policy won’t let the
people you’ve written an article about proof-
read the piece before you print it. I wish you
could have just run the key pages from my ver-
Sion so people could judge for themselves
which works better, instead of focusing on
behind the scene arguments. Such as.. .40
cent of my version of Timespirits remained
exactly as Perry wrote it in the first place, and
it was never my idea to remove his name from
the credits. Also, while there are a number of
“motherfuckers” portrayed in the story,
nowhere did I ever use that word.
The correct medium for making a political
statement is whatever medium you have. To
protect the business interests of its leaders in
1954 the C.I.A. destroyed a very constructive
democracy in Guatemala. The facts about the
successive military dictatorships are too sicken-
ing to relate. But they’ve made Guatemala
miserable for over 30 years with the enthusi-
astic support of right wing America.. The most
victimized people in Guatemala are the
Indians. When Steve Perry sent the Timespirits
(also Indians) to Central America it seemed
only logical for them to side with the local
natives. At least I thought so.

I think somebody should print a collected edition of Timespirits.